146. Revenge Tour/Rising Pain

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  1. revenge tour.” She waved her eyebrows up and down at me,e and I was speechless.

    Extra e hanging out there.

    (Reminder, none of this is criticizing, just editing <3)

  2. There’s an extra beginning of the paragraph in here:

    I bit my lip, trying to steady my breathing as another wave of warmth rolled through me.

    I was awakened by being shaken from the most x-rated dream of Thane I had ever had. These

    “What…what is going on?” I asked, confused, sitting up and working the painful creak out of my neck.

    1. THANK YOU. you may find that a lot I’m having issues from pasting to wordpress from grammarly or word. It adds middle of the sentence commas in wordpress (this site) and it doubles sentences or paragraphs from word. I have no idea, but I will fix them!

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