316. The Gift

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  1. So. Hear me out. Ayla and the twins come to the door after bouncing around discussion about torture methods. Before she scoops up the twins to go inside.
    Cyrus: I can feel Raven torn next to me, between completing her mission, and running to Ayla. I knew she missed that little she wolf darn hard though she never let me see it.
    “We won’t start the fun without you fireball, pinky promise. Go.”
    She looked at me, trying to hide the joy in her eyes. Then grabbed my extended pinky and bit it hard before passing me the chains and sprinting past Thane to near on tackle Ayla. I grinned, they really were as much as sisters as Thane and I were brothers. I saw Thane tense slightly, no doubt on high alert now she was knocked up again but he was grinning when he looked back at me. Raven released Ayla and got on all fours to be at eye level with the little menaces. I heard a playful growl and shrill giggles from the twins as she crawled after them, chasing with tickling fingers.
    Oh shit, I like that playful side a little too much. Probably shouldn’t let me mind go that way right now, I was already quite uncomfortable with the chains she gave me in my hand.

  2. My only question is whatever happened with the white wolf records the Hermit had in the totes? Did I miss a chapter? I feel like we skipped a bit part of that

    1. It’s going in the spin-off. Cyrus+Ravne=slaughter Tyler+theo=working with them and finding mate(s) while taking down omega auctions and heat drug. Side quest of the cool uncle etc personal look at each others history/flash backs etc.dealing with raven side effects of experimentation- Thane+Ayla=children older-more children-navigating their powers-white wolf records/lore=? set up for other supernatural beings and/or powers segway-female of alphas new generation drama– whatever else i come up with. damon+Amani=having kids/running pack–intersection family dinners–intersect in the Thane/Cyrus/Tyler/Theo alpha man team up for something?–maybe brothel drama…pimp issues?? Rhonda and the menopause squad+mikhail=? what does that look like? Did she open an illegal gambling ring in her bar and does amani work there? WHATS A BIGGER THREAT THAN THANE? IS THERE ONE?…MAYBE…? Thanks for letting me pen down my random ideas so I don’t lose them!

      1. Jennifer Noice

        Oh how exciting… Can’t wait to read more. So glad you put your link on that site so I could read it here properly! Will look out for the next book x

    2. Oh my goodness, I have been wondering the same thing. I need some kind of revelation that the hermit’s files held.
      Also I would like to have learned more about the relationship between how Raven and Ayla were related. Considering neither of them were related to Stephens. I really thought that after Mikhail said that Raven looked like his wife, that he was talking like Raven’s mom was his wife’s sister. Was it supposed to mean that Raven’s father (whom she killed) was not her biological father and that Stephens was? But that would still not make any connection via DNA from Stephens to Ayla.
      If it said what the DNA report said, it would have helped I think.
      Another thing that would have kind of been cool would be to hear a Mikhail’s point of view. I so badly wanted to hear how his mind worked. The characters were so very different. It made it super entertaining and never boring!!
      Overall, this is the best book as far as plot, characters, and points of view. I wish the whole book was on this site. I want to reread it all!!!

      1. Also I will say I have not written Ravens epilog yet and I have decided to do a deeper editing. When I was writing these chapters for the writing platforms there was a word restriction now there is no.so now I’m going through the chapters and re-uploading… I am fleshing them out more…adding things etc. so I will make all of this more clear.

  3. LISA Spurrier

    Great book. Looking forward to Raven and Cyrus book and The midnight pack book. A great read and i would also reread after you expand the older chapters

  4. Jody Freeland

    What about thier wolves?
    Do they ever have pack runs?
    Do they ever shift for fun wolf games?
    Anyother fun they all can have…
    I am so glad I got to finish this book…I loved it from the first paragraph to the last word.
    I can not wait to find out what they do with all the prisoners.

    1. There will be another round with a time jump coming soon. I’m waiting until I have Lia’s Redemption finished, and we are probably down to that last five chapters or so then I will start a new Omega Bound. I really only have like one chapter planned though, but I winged the first one so what’s one more?!

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