Amy Franklin April 12, 2026 at 8:20 am There’s a tense shift in the third from last paragraph and into the next (walks /walked, shift/shifted) xx Log in to Reply
Sonora Reingurber April 25, 2026 at 11:24 pm Looks like a copy of the chapter was accidentally pasted in the middle of itself 4 sentences from the end. Log in to Reply
Mary Ann Myers August 15, 2026 at 3:34 pm He was in Wolf form. He told her to stay and eat her cake and he’ll be back. Who is he talking or mind linking to? 🙂 Log in to Reply
There’s a tense shift in the third from last paragraph and into the next (walks /walked, shift/shifted) xx
thank you!
Looks like a copy of the chapter was accidentally pasted in the middle of itself 4 sentences from the end.
He was in Wolf form. He told her to stay and eat her cake and he’ll be back. Who is he talking or mind linking to? 🙂