These also seem out of order. The top paragraph should come last.
“I don’t have a preference. I will take as many with you as I can get, Ayla.” I pull her in and hold her for a deep kiss before tucking her into the car and heading back to our home.
Her words hit me square in the chest. I slid my arm around her waist and pulled her flush against me, one hand cupping the back of her neck as I claimed her mouth in a slow, deep kiss. The cold air disappeared for a moment, replaced by the warmth of her lips and the steady pull of the mating bond.
I held her there until her body softened, then guided her into the passenger seat and shut the door.
These also seem out of order. The top paragraph should come last.
“I don’t have a preference. I will take as many with you as I can get, Ayla.” I pull her in and hold her for a deep kiss before tucking her into the car and heading back to our home.
Her words hit me square in the chest. I slid my arm around her waist and pulled her flush against me, one hand cupping the back of her neck as I claimed her mouth in a slow, deep kiss. The cold air disappeared for a moment, replaced by the warmth of her lips and the steady pull of the mating bond.
I held her there until her body softened, then guided her into the passenger seat and shut the door.