Amy Franklin April 16, 2026 at 2:15 pm A few tense changes. I’m really enjoying reading this so I hope this helps: “A few minutes later, which felt like an eternity, Cyrus found us in the elevator.” “What the hell happened?” He yelled out, checking Thane for a pulse.” “mouth dropped open, and my eyes went wide.” Log in to Reply
A few tense changes. I’m really enjoying reading this so I hope this helps:
“A few minutes later, which felt like an eternity, Cyrus found us in the elevator.”
“What the hell happened?” He yelled out, checking Thane for a pulse.”
“mouth dropped open, and my eyes went wide.”
got it!