Something is crossing wires from taking copying my chapter in grammarly after I have edited and pasting here. It is merging paragraphs and my commas are jumping in the middle of words and other crap. I believe I found the missing chapter and I’m trying to narrow down what chapter I wrote that ending/echange in.
I think something is missing here and the last couple of paragraphs are in Aylas voice and out of order.
” That’s right, James, I would.” I turn to Ayla, her eyes wide with surprise. I know I’ll hear about this later, but I have some words for my mate.
I shake my head, still catching my breath, a lazy smile spreading across my face. “It was perfect.” “
i think i got two chapters merged in to one….better check
Something is crossing wires from taking copying my chapter in grammarly after I have edited and pasting here. It is merging paragraphs and my commas are jumping in the middle of words and other crap. I believe I found the missing chapter and I’m trying to narrow down what chapter I wrote that ending/echange in.