Amy Franklin April 18, 2026 at 11:54 am Hey, quite a few tense changes here. I’m not sure if the bit with Aramana is deliberately past-tense? Typically you write in the present tense but a lot of this chapter is slipping into past tense. Also: “keep you safe and you pups safe.” your* Hope this helps xx Log in to Reply
Hey, quite a few tense changes here. I’m not sure if the bit with Aramana is deliberately past-tense? Typically you write in the present tense but a lot of this chapter is slipping into past tense.
Also: “keep you safe and you pups safe.” your*
Hope this helps xx